"Let's go on a trip!"
"Sounds fun!"
"Okay!"
There were three female flies of age three named Flee, Flo, and Flum. They decided to go on a trip. They came out from their home in the trash can and flew a while until they reached a house with an open window in to the attic. Flee, Flo, and Flum flew around to find a place to sleep during the night.
"What about here?"
"Okay. It is a nice corner to sleep in!"
So the three flies went to sleep in the corner.
When the three flies woke up they found themselves caged inside a spider web cage.
"Oh no!"
"We're caged!"
"What should we do?"
"Why don't we...
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A cute story about three flies :) You personified the flies and the spider very well. However, you could have written more on elaborating your story. Maybe you can tell the readers about where the flies live, why the flies really wanted to go on a trip, and how the house looked like.
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